Dear dear sis of mine
We are the two sides to a coin
Do you gauge the strength of mine?
None can ever know the depth
None can ever measure its intensity
We come to this world with an empty pot
Will fill it with love that can be got
Some are lucky but others are muggy
None can walk the privileged path
You and I know this to be
Very well intertwined
In body and mind we will be varied
But never in our soul that’s so twined
That has known a journey together
Never to be left apart to whither
Our soul will rise like a smoke
Will curl and furl still together
We may be carved as two in one
But still we will be embossed as one
They show the exterior
But we know the intrinsic
Will pray to be recycled
In many a birth
You will always
be my dear never fear
sunkan
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Dear Sunkan,
So Sorry for not reading it before, It so so good and very impressive, Loved it.
Poonam
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Beautiful and touching!!!
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thanku subbu,
when u appreciate it goes a long way more here..sunkan
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thanku ajit,
happy for your invaluable comment here..sunkan
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thanku madhvi,
happy for your appreciation here..sunkan
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happy mrs muffet you commented here..sunkan
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thanku simmu happy u loved them..sunkan
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Simply Great write sunkan
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My dear Sunkanji,
An Extraordinary and emotion filled poem with all its realistic words seen.
Great efforts and cute message of contest theme indeed.
Keep rocking the bloggers happiness by sharing such wonderful thoughts.
All our best wishes
Subbu
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good one again................simply great sunkun!
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