The perfect boat ride:
The excitement full and the morning dull
With all those misty slight drizzle
There slowly it took a move ahead
slid into the lake ahead
I clasped my hand to waive the shiver
Which creep into my bone without revelation?
As I tugged my heart within
There stood the loneliness so barren
The beat of heart swayed to the rhythm
Of the rocking boat within
Held the hot brew to keep at bay
All those lonely thoughts away
Let me share the moment of spray
That drenched my face without restraint
The waterfront so endless vast
Made me feel so full at last
The bounty natures need never a position
To lean or seek a situation
Let me learn a thing or two
To be on my own so true
Waves move behind in motion
To send forth life in fusion
The soft paddle on the water
Rhythm that show a lot that matter
The birds and nature so in motion
A picturesque drama in unison
The dark clouds are here to foretell
What the day ahead in prophesy
Slursh slursh the sound so near
Announcing the shore is here
As I walk away in vain
Holding all those thoughts in pain…sunkan
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raogaru,
it has been a very long time since u visited my blogs or left a comment jab aap ache kehthey haintho zarroor acha hi hoga, happy u also made my day bycommenting here, if there was none to cheer what would the bloggers world be..sunkan
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Amma sunkan,
What a poem! I read first thing in the morning. Looks like it is going to be a good day.
With best wishes and a vote,
Ramarao.
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dear chithra,
this is the outcome of going into the vision of my younger one who is in kumarakaom and alone among her friends, so thought what could be on her mind, and these words came out thank you for being here to comment, most invaluable for me...sunkan
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WOW!!!!!!! Sunkan... The boat ride can be enjoyed in solitude too..
Good one dear!
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